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'The Dim World' - Intro

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                             Intro
Hey. My name is Angel, but most of my friends call me Angie, Ange, etc. I used to be normal; I lived a normal life, had normal friends. That all changed when I was five.

I can't remember it all, but I've been told things. When I was five, in the year 2077, I heard on the radio that president Reynald was murdered. My parents seemed freaked out but I disregarded them. Soon, some jerks from the government took over and announced that humans should not try to hide. I swear they were martians because the messages? They were in our heads. Soon my parents were taken away and so was I. We were dragged away towards a castle-like building with barbed wire fences. I remember Mom and Dad being pulled away from me and... I don't feel like going on... But since I was five (I'm thirteen now,) the world has changed. The Remainers call it the Dim World.
I thought of this story in French class today and it usually helps me to think a rough draft and not write it. This is the intro.
My story is sort of a mix between Maximum Ride by James Patterson, Cell by Stephen King, and The Hunger Games (forgot who that was by lol.)
Should I make Chapter 2 and 3? I'm already working on number one. Please leave NICE comments and suggestions! =D
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